Master_Yoda

thanks for your review, Reishabh. I am sorry if you found that the poem was unnecessarily dirty because of the F-bomb :(

Hey Tom, thank you for the very detailed and thoughtful review. I suppose the term "fucking" is meant to establish frustration at just how she frustrated the narrator (read me), ...

Thanks Ruby :) The word "fucking" was meant to establish a deep frustration, and the rest of the poem is meant to slip into a tone of resignation. This is ...

Thank you marmalade!! Glad you like it :)

Why thank you Audy! From someone who's poetry I respect as I highly as I do yours, this is high praise indeed. You assume correctly, and the period is meant ...

Thank you, Luata!

by excitement butterflies I mean the butterflies in your stomach that you're trying to experience again.

Thanks writervid! The capitalization connotes significance of self with butterflies, the lack thereof connotes a lack of significance

Thanks marmalade! With the butterflies I is meaningful, without them, i is searching.

Thank you! Chasing butterflies is the title, to answer your question!

Thanks for buying an ice cream! Also, your feedback is as always on point, Sir. Your interpretation is close to my intention, but not exactly so. The poem is about ...

Thank you for the really nice review :)

This poem sucks, because you didn't tell us the chihuahua's name.

@GreenTulip: I read through the poem and magpie's response, and I honestly don't know what you're so upset about. You put this work up for review, and that invites criticism. ...

no probs :) btw, I understand why you wouldn't like the style. It's really just personal preference.