MaryQuiteContrary

I think on the last line you mean to "expect" the very worst. Other than that let me say that I know how you feel. I've been having similar thoughts ...

That sounds like an indictment of internet message boards in general. And a very good one at that!

It sounds like someone who is preparing for a battle or some other task that may very well end in their death. The first half was very coherent but the ...

That was a very cute, compact poem. At first I thought it would be too trite, but I ended up liking it very much.

What a nice way to sum up a perfect autumn day.I was half-expecting something bad to happen so I was relieved when it stay pleasant til the end.

This rates really high on the creepy meter. Nothing is said overtly, but the metaphors are enough to let my imagination fill in the blanks. Good job!