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MaryJaneStallheizer

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: The Flight

    I have recentley lost my grandmother, and I found myself relating to this in so many ways. I am absolutley marveled by your writing. Words can't describe how beautiful this ...

    Dec 1, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Puppets

    I agree with the other comments that it was a really imaginative way how you compared a man to a puppet. I have never read anything like this before and ...

    Nov 17, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: How close we used to be.

    I really found this poem to be emotional especially the fact that it is a true story. This poem reminds me of how peer pressure can really influence a person. ...

    Nov 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Suppose

    Hey there! Let me first of all say I have definatley been in the shoes of this character in the poem. I've often thought about if I did die, what ...

    Nov 4, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Mommy, why are you so cold?

    Wow, this really is quite deep and emotional. These kind of poems are definatley the hardest for me to read and I can understand the character's feeling quite well in ...

    Oct 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Spring Serenade

    I really loved this poem. It had a smooth flow and was very merry. Like the other comments, the rhyming was excellent! I thought it was not possible to have ...

    Oct 29, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Measurement?

    Hey I really liked this! I often ask myself this question over and over again. What really is time? What would the world be like without the idea of time. ...

    Oct 25, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My Secret Love

    This is such a beautiful poem! I love the meaning behind it all. I agree with the other comment that you're never to young to find love. This poem is ...

    Oct 22, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: My last wish...

    This is a really moving poem. I myself could relate to many parts in this poem. My favorite line has to be I no longer feel the breeze from the ...

    Oct 15, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re:

    This was a very beautiful and deep thinking poem. I enjoyed reading it. I found this poem very fascinating. My favorite line has to be For living is living and ...

    Oct 10, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Imagine

    I love this! My favorite part line has to be Imagination; the key to a colorful life I think that's something that the world forgets every now and then. It ...

    Oct 9, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: I Wanted to Change My Name

    Great poem! I really understand how the character feels. People say that my name is weird and strage too. I would always ask my mom- "why didn't you name me ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Rainbow

    I really enjoyed this poem! I definatly agree with some of the other posts about the imagery in the poem, because it was phenomenal! The only thing I thought was ...

    Oct 8, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Mommy didn't care...

    This was a brilliant poem. It was a little hard for me to read because I can relate to some parts of it. This is a character who I can ...

    Oct 8, 2011


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