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. This new season freaks me out. It should be like, 16+ or something -_- 
Wow, this really is quite deep and emotional. These kind of poems are definatley the hardest for me to read and I can understand the character's feeling quite well in this poem. This was a brilliant poem my favorite part of this poem has to to be
this was an absolutely great way to start off. I could see the image in my head, and the emotions went through my head. I really thought that this poem had a lot of feeling in it, and you I look forward to reading more of your work!oh my gosh. I love this idea, i thought that you repeating the mommy part, was very well used.
Wow. You did a really...like REALLY good job with this poem. If this is what has happened to you in real life then Bless your Sould. I will be praying for you. But either way, you completely painted a picture in my head although the poem wasn't exactly descriptive. Which is completely fine because you did such an amazing job of telling a story through this poem that touched my heart. Keep up the good work.
Awesome poetry! It looks like you suffered so much. This poem reminds of Eminem's lyrics. I loved the last two lines. This shows how much you love your mother.
The poem really impressed me!
Your poem is very emotional and good. You can give a musical effect to it by using alliterations and rhyming scheme. These were the main things about Alfred Lord Tennyson's poems. You can add last few lines telling how much you love your mommy.