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This is a really interesting piece. It's easy to read yet beautiful. You did a lovely job of describing the characters without diving too much into their appearance. I really ...

Thanks Flame!

Thanks Silver! I make that mistake all the time. I typically catch myself, but obviously not this time. I'm sorry I left you frustrated :( I'll have more up soon, ...

Thank you! I had a feeling this was going to be a boring chapter because so much of it is talking. I edited out a lot of not-needed stuff to ...

You're welcome :)

Thank you! I tend to be on the lower key side of the drama, but I definitely see what you mean. I'm still working on the whole "leave myself at ...

This is an interesting piece. I like how you can point at that she's a prostitute without full out saying it in the poem. You seem good with words. Nice ...

Awe thank you :)

Thank you! :)

Oh my God, thank you so much :) Rick is one of my biggest inspirations and Percy Jackson is my all time favorite series. This made my night :D

Thank you! :D

Hey Cheetah! Thanks for the critiques :) the first one was a typo. It's supposed to read, "...like she'd heard that a time or twenty before." Thanks again :)

This is gorgeous :)

Anytime :)

Haha thanks! I'll have one up tomorrow :)