Marshymallow

I think you should write more poetry! I liked this it had a really interesting story and the repetition of 'the kingdom is bent' emphasises your point well. I read ...

Absolutely amazing. I really really like your descriptions and sophistication in vocabulary. I just love love love it. I could picture everything and I felt like I was thrown into ...

Another amazing poem from you! I love the idea that the silence is like a wall closing in as the speaker gets clustered in a claustrophobic prison of awkwardness. The ...

Wow, that is impactful... The idea that we are all puppets to a greater force (e.g. The government) is both plausible and frightening. I like how the speaker talks of ...

This poem is very descriptive and fun to read. I like how you give us the hint that land referred to promise land as the reader is given that idea ...

This is a very cute poem! I like the image of the journey that the little pine tree experiences as it climbs taller than it ever imagined. You could think ...

Oooh I like this. You create an emotional ambiance for the reader to dance across as the are drawn into your impactful story of someone giving up on what they ...

First of all wow! The vocabulary in this was absolutely amazing! I really enjoyed reading this poem as you kept me flying through the lines enjoying all of the imagery ...

This is a beautiful poem! I love the power that you force into the reader through each line compelling them to read on like there is no going back. I ...

Wow this poem had a very powerful story! I was compelled to read as this snippet of a demonic tale unfolded making the reader want to continue on after it ...