Mars

Hey! So, if I critique this now, you'll have four hours to edit. Not that this needs much editing. :D Is teeming with hatred, prowess, and might. Okay. So in ...

Hey! So, if you need a review, there's this forum where you can request them . Anyway, to make up for it I'm going to give you the super awesome ...

Heya! I really, really liked this poem. The imagery was beautiful, especially the 'velvet-violet hands' (that was my favorite part). :D Have you forgotten? I think this line is redundant, ...

This is beautiful, take my word for it. I'm not sure if this a speech, or a journal entry, or a personal essay, but I have one suggestion which is ...

Oh, this is so cute, Evi! I loved it. Let's see if I can help you before Monday and, incidentally, procrastinate writing my fifth entry. ;-) First of all, in ...

Hannah! Finally, I'm here...sorry it took so long. But I got my computer back! Anyway. “I won't be gone that long.” I assumed this was her mother, or a parental ...

Aye aye aye, chica.

Hey Rod! At dawn there shall be due 'Due' is like a due date for an assignment. 'Dew' is what's on the leaves in the morning. That little speck of ...

Hey! I've never done lyrics before, and it's kind of hard to critique without knowing your tune, so bear with me here. I just want a guy not like the ...

Hi :) This is fairly short so I don't have much to say. Scripts (at least at this stage when it's a script and not a play/movie/serial :P) are all ...

Meepster! I will totally review this for you. Dearest, I have cried until my tears ran dry. I think it should be 'run'? But I'm not sure. Verb tenses are ...

Hey Ky ^^ So, this is a very interesting poem. I love the sort of mocking tone it has, how the poem itself is making fun of the narrator while ...

Hey Zakku! First of all, a couple of technicalities: :arrow: You need some punctuation! It doesn't have to be after every line and it doesn't have to be all commas ...

This *actually* made me get up and go see if there was ice cream in the freezer. No lie. There wasn't, though. Anyway, this is incredibly cute! Awh. First of ...

Heya! It's well interesting to read fiction by you, as I think I've only reviewed your poetry? :D Also I'm sorry this is a bit late, I hardly check that ...