MargoSeuss

Oh my. How profound. I like how you so smoothly transitioned between a positive experience to a negative experience, and all surrounding an apple! This poem is a true insight ...

Effective ending! When I was reading this I thought it to be a little lame, but that salutation at the end turned lame into fame! The whole time I was ...

How do you write with music in the background? My brain gets all fumbled up and starts writing down whatever song it is that I'm listening to. Grand story. You ...

The concept is cool. I'm not sure how original it is, however. I have read books with similar plots regarding a character who has died and is stuck in limbo ...

Hello thar! This is Margo for a review. This poem has, for the most part, good flow. The ryme could be a little stronger. "Scream and shout and let it ...

Rule number one boys: there is more to a girl than beauty..and boobs. If beauty and boobs is all you see than you gonna get an explosion!!! :) Well told. ...

You wrote this scene fantastically! It was as if you wrote it straight into my head. Like Judas, I don't usually read romance, nor do I write it. But I ...

Why, hello. This is a most captivating idea. You've definetly portrayed the whole one person can make a difference idea. I could see this scene that you painted for me ...

Well, it would appear you are already satisfied with this work. And you should be! This story was straight and to the point without leaving anything to be desired. Here ...

Wow! This is the perfect attention grabbing prologue! I'm captivated! Super job here! You managed to intrigue with a nice short intro. I can't wait to see what else I ...

I definetly agree that this seems to be a diary entry. I'm glad you are using writing as an outlet. I do the same thing, as I see a lot ...

Hello! Boy oh boy! The topic of being blind since birth. This idea really boggles my mind! Sometimes I think about what it is to be blind: not being able ...

Oh boy..this poem may be too deep for me! Not sure I understand the red spot purple wave thing. From what I gather, this poem is about social rejects and ...

Now, I don't think this poem could necessarily be interpretted as about insanity. It could also be about our muses. The "voices in our head" could just be ideas fluttering ...

Cool! This poor girl needs serious therapy! You really described the scene well here. I felt like I was watching the whole thing happen on TV! The way Kerry feels ...