MapleWay

Correct! Thanks for the review! I'll definitely do more in the future!

Thanks! Also, you're correct! I'll send the 50 points now!

That must have been a LOT of work! You have a good day/night too!

WOW! THIS WAS AMAZING! The words were descriptive, the timing was perfect, the imagery was off the charts! THIS DESERVES A FOLLOW! Also, I am very alarmed. And congrats on ...

Thanks! I'll change a couple of those!

This was an awesome story! It had a spooky vibe to it and multiple great surprises. Not only that but the ending was incredible! I think it would be really ...

Thanks for the review! I took some inspiration from your advice and changed it up a bit!

Thanks!

Your welcome! Thank you for the kind review!

cool!

This was a pretty intriguing story! There was a lot of dialogue and I found a couple of grammatical errors. To help catch them I would download Grammarly. It is ...

Maybe something like, "The fog" or "The Behemoth."

Awesome! I can't wait to read it!

No problem! Thanks for writing it!

Wow! This was very touching! I could feel the thought put into it. Each word was essential to the story. This is going to help many people!