Malamaya

Okay, Hi SmaugsIntern! So the way you started it was great! You introduced quite a bunch of Characters I like how you did the dialogue, you really get to see ...

Hello! I enjoyed the story, the idea of it is incredible and it speaks. There are a few things you need to work on though, the spacing caused a problem ...

Oh wow! This is such a beautiful story! I just wow! The title caught my attention since it was in Latin and I thought 'Hey why not?' that is a ...

A wonderful work! You did an amazing job describing how beautiful a spider web can be. I like how you added the morning dew there, it adds an extra layer ...

Nice story! I like how you started it, it's a great start for a suicide note. The starting paragraph is good, rambling about their life because he doesn't care anymore. ...

A great story! I love the concept of the painting and how it mirror's their life, I also noticed that the painting went through the seasons as their life started ...

Nice poem! I like how it talks about what comes with depression and how people can ignore it. My favorite in there is, "Or do you, like the rest of ...

Nice poem! The idea of guardians soothing her is great, plus the wording of it is excellent! It would have been nice to see a bit divulging into this, like ...

Wow, great poem! I like how you repeated the lines there, it just adds to the feeling of building rage and then the cold feeling when it finally releases. "The ...

An inspirational and relatable story! I relate to how her mother doubts she can paint because she is blind, and yet she overcame the obstacle. It inspires me and fills ...