Maki-Chan

well it wasn't too bad. the ending was alright. I give it a 6.5/10.

nice job- I see nothing wrong with it. It was awsome!!!!!!!!! ^_+^_^_^_^_^_^_^__^^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^_^__^^__^_^^_^__^^__^^_^ Well done. 10/10

Thanks Rose, if killTheZobie (timmy) hurries up the next chapter should be soon.

its ok Sythe. Its important to help others with thier mistakes si they can improve. But there is a thin line between correcting and being just plain mean. Do not ...

^_^ Hurray! I am gald you enjoyed it Timea! I'll correct and add more detail about the hollow and how Maki felt about it.

I thought it wasn't too bad, just space it out a bit please.

not bad- loved the message. Its a little bit rough witht he flow though.

ok.....? I- well its ok.

not bad. I liked it. ^_^

I liked it all but the end. Its just to straight foreward. Can you change it?

I liked this alot. If you correct the stuff the others put before, your poem will be awsome!!!!!! ^_^

I like this, ever since I read your 'Hang Man' story. I want to read more of your fan-ficts. You bring good justice towars other characters ^_^

I LOVE IT!!!!!! Can you write anymore fanficts?? Especailly The Legend Of Zelda!!!!! Please!!!

wow.....long.....very long......scary.... maybe you should split this into 2 parts? So its smaller and not so scary?

separate please- hard to read. It'll also help attract more pleople to read and review it. ^_^