MagentaDefined

The way this story starts I immediately thought "This is going to be dark". Your description of the character was so vivid I could almost see this creature preening itself ...

The way you described the setting is very effective, it gives a feel to how harsh the reality of a hospital is - when most of the time people romanticize ...

I don't usually comment on poetry, but I feel you've really created an amazing poem. Your rhyming and repetition are really well placed and I feel that most people would ...

I sort of understand where you're trying to go with this, but at the same time I don't. Okay my very few comments: If they "never had mates of sorts" ...

I've read a lot of zombie stories, and for a short zombie story to have such a 'punch' is really admirable. In my personal opinion the fact that your character ...

I really enjoyed the way you started this story, it seemed like you had just tortured the victims and you were surprised that they hadn't been grateful. Moreover, your characters ...