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  • Novel / Chapter » Romantic, Realistic Re: ~Mr. Popular and Mr. Nobody~ Chapter 1: Freak

    I saw you posted the first chapter of your story over in a recent blog post, so I thought I'd check it out and leave a review! I skimmed over ...

    May 25, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Other Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 8]

    It's taken me far too long to get around to reviewing your novel, but I'm finally here to comment on all of the chapters I've missed! So let's get to ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Art » Narrative, Dramatic Re: True Freedom

    Hello there, @R.Harini! I apologize for taking so long to read your work and write this review, but I'm finally here to look it over. The first thing I noticed ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Literature Re: Illusion

    Hello there, @whatchamacallit! This review is very much belated, but I thought you'd appreciate a surprise review this review day. So let's get started! I had to reread your poem ...

    Apr 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Humor Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 7]

    Hey Hedwiggle! I'm here for that promised review. :) Audrey was now on Will’s back, half-asleep, and Will had unbuttoned the first two buttons on his black shirt. You really ...

    Mar 22, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 6]

    Hey there, Hedwiggle! I'm back again for another review - and it looks like I'm the first person to leave one! “If I trip over one more root, I’ll die ...

    Mar 18, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Mystery / Suspense Re: A Painter & Writer's Magic [Chapter 5]

    Hello again! Now that I've reached the last chapter you've posted, here's the promised review. Before I start reviewing this chapter - or even reading it - I just want ...

    Mar 17, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: Upon A Hope-A Heroes Story

    Hey there, @EverLight! I'm here to review your poem. @JabberHut already mentioned this in her review, but one of the first things I noticed in this piece was the religious ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Novel / Chapter » Lyrical, Realistic Re: my foul infinity

    Hey there, @Anamel! I'm here to review your work. The poem's description doesn't provide a lot of context for the subject of the poem, other than the conflict of comfort ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: Just Another Melancholy Heartbreak Song

    Hey there, @MeherazulAzim16! I'm here to review your work. I love works that are self aware of what they are, so I knew I was going to enjoy your song ...

    Jan 26, 2020
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Other Re: revolutionize the world

    Hi, @Anamel! I saw this lurking in Green Room and it looked great from a quick skim, so I thought I'd try my hand at reviewing it. Your poem reminds ...

    Jan 16, 2020
  • Poetry » General, Realistic Re: The Fence-sitter

    Hello, @Liminality! I saw this lurking in the Green Room , so I thought I'd help you out by getting it out of there. My first thought on your poem ...

    Jan 16, 2020
  • Lyrics » Lyrical, General Re: i can't change your mind

    Hey there, sound! I saw this in the Green Room and love your writing, so I just had to review it. :) I actually just reviewed a song @niteowl wrote, ...

    Jan 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Fantasy, Other Re: follow me down

    Hey Scarli! I saw this lurking in the Green Room , so here I am. :) It's been more than a year since I learned about sestinas in my Creative ...

    Jan 15, 2020
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: Museum of Unrequited Love

    I also saw this lurking in Green Room , so I thought I'd review it, too! My first thought on how to tackle this poem - and this review - ...

    Jan 15, 2020


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