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Re: Starlight: Chapter 5 (Part II)
Hi, yizhongt! Mage here to review this story! :D So let's get to it, shall we? I keep on loving this story~ The cocky initiate introduced this chapter is a ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Starlight Chapter 5 (Part I)
Hi, yizhongt! Mage here to do the promised long-overdue review! :D So let's get to it, shall we? Once again, I'm throughly impressed by this story. I love the world-building ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Death's Reign: Chapter XIII
[Note: I'm so sorry for posting that random blank comment! I accidentally posted my review as a comment, and I worked hard on it, so I didn't want to lose ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Hurting 'Sweet Past'
Hi, Shakthi! Mage here to do the promised overdue review! :D So let's get to it, shall we? This was beautiful and full of emotion. The descriptions you provided were ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: The clan of the dead_Chapter one: The origins
Hi Maricore! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! :D So let's get to it, shall we? This definitely has a lot of good ideas in it. However, ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 5: Homework and Hats (Part 2)
Hi MicrohieraxFT! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! :D So let's get straight to it, shall we? The biggest grammatical error I noticed was with tenses. There's ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 2 - The White Boy | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanfiction
Hi Born! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! :D So let's get onto this review, shall we? This chapter was very well written. Your descriptions of characters ...
Jun 26, 2016 -
Re: Chapter 1 - Foreign Chick? | The Performer: A Danganronpa Fanficton
Hi Born (is it alright if I call you that?)! Mage here to do the promised review! :D First off: Hello, Leon, we meet again. *glares* I watched the anime, ...
May 30, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 6
Konnichiwa, Zolen! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I'm glad Zeno chose the Lux Historia. Not only does it sound awesome, but I loved the name of it. ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 5
Hola, Zolen (wanted to change up the greeting)! Mage here to do the promised review! :D One of my favorite things about this story is how Zeno levels up. As ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 4
Hi Zolen! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I forgot to say this last chapter, but I really love the picture for this story. I'm guessing you're the ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 3
Hi Zolen! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D Same problems this chapter as the ones I mentioned earlier, and my suggestion of reading your work out loud ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: A Dungeon Boss's Journal Chapter 2
Hello from the other side-of the screen, Zolen! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D I'm going to quickly tell you of all the problems I noted so ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Poet's Branch (Part 2)
Hi Alice! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D Like GreatKing before me, I'm shocked this has so many likes but only his review (and mine). I'm also ...
May 29, 2016 -
Re: Poet's Branch (Part 1)
Hi, Alice! :D Mage here to do the promised review! Since I think your other reviewers have gotten the grammar and things like that down, I'll talk about some other ...
May 29, 2016