Mageheart

Hi, yizhongt! Mage here to review this story! :D So let's get to it, shall we? I keep on loving this story~ The cocky initiate introduced this chapter is a ...

Hi, yizhongt! Mage here to do the promised long-overdue review! :D So let's get to it, shall we? Once again, I'm throughly impressed by this story. I love the world-building ...

[Note: I'm so sorry for posting that random blank comment! I accidentally posted my review as a comment, and I worked hard on it, so I didn't want to lose ...

Hi, Shakthi! Mage here to do the promised overdue review! :D So let's get to it, shall we? This was beautiful and full of emotion. The descriptions you provided were ...

Hi Maricore! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! :D So let's get to it, shall we? This definitely has a lot of good ideas in it. However, ...

Hi MicrohieraxFT! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! :D So let's get straight to it, shall we? The biggest grammatical error I noticed was with tenses. There's ...

Hi Born! Mage here to do the long overdue promised review! :D So let's get onto this review, shall we? This chapter was very well written. Your descriptions of characters ...

Hi Born (is it alright if I call you that?)! Mage here to do the promised review! :D First off: Hello, Leon, we meet again. *glares* I watched the anime, ...

Konnichiwa, Zolen! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I'm glad Zeno chose the Lux Historia. Not only does it sound awesome, but I loved the name of it. ...

Hola, Zolen (wanted to change up the greeting)! Mage here to do the promised review! :D One of my favorite things about this story is how Zeno levels up. As ...

Hi Zolen! Mage here to do the promised review! :D I forgot to say this last chapter, but I really love the picture for this story. I'm guessing you're the ...

Hi Zolen! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D Same problems this chapter as the ones I mentioned earlier, and my suggestion of reading your work out loud ...

Hello from the other side-of the screen, Zolen! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D I'm going to quickly tell you of all the problems I noted so ...

Hi Alice! Mage here to finally do the promised review! :D Like GreatKing before me, I'm shocked this has so many likes but only his review (and mine). I'm also ...

Hi, Alice! :D Mage here to do the promised review! Since I think your other reviewers have gotten the grammar and things like that down, I'll talk about some other ...