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  • Short Story » Narrative, General Re: Makeup is a Mask

    Hi, pastelqueen! Mage here to reveal this story! So let's get to it, shall we? First things first: I love your writing style. I love how it flows, and the ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Science Fiction, Fantasy Re: Starlight: Chapter 6 (Part I)

    Hi, yizhongt! Mage here to review this chapter! So let's get to it, shall we? I will never cease to be amazed by your world building skills. I loved the ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Poetry » Literature, General Re: Writer's healing

    Hi, ChocolateCello! Mage here to review your poem! So let's get to it, shall we? This was incredibly well-written. Everything flowed together beautifully, conveying a message and opening my eyes ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Einar (First Draft)- Chapter 4

    Hi, haredrier! Mage here to review this chapter! So let's get to it, shall we? Your descriptions are excellent, and your story flows. The plot is also an interesting one, ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Teen Fiction Re: Gregor and the Bloodbath of Regalia: Chapter 1

    Hi, BlueJayWalker10! Mage here to review your fanfiction! So let's get to it, shall we?:D I was shocked when I found this. I read the Underland Chronicles several years ago, ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Werewolfing. 3

    Hi, AnarchyWolf! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? I really like the characters you've introduced the reader to by this point of ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Werewolfing. 2

    Hi, AnarchyWolf! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? Like before, I'm in love with your writing. It's fluid, advanced, and incredibly descriptive. ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Werewolfing. 1

    Hi, AnarchyWolf! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? Your writing style flows nicely, and the vocabulary you use throughout this chapter is ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Cave - Chapter IV - The Four Kingdoms

    Hi, Cupcakes! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? This chapter proved to be very entertaining. I knew it would be the moment ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Cave - Chapter III - Wizard of Oz Vibes

    Hi, Cupcakes! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? I'm still hopelessly in love with this story, especially with the medieval/steampunk clothing. If ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Cave - Chapter II - Oliver's Death

    Hi Cupcakes! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to the review, shall we? Like I said last chapter, I love your writing style. It's both advanced ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Humor Re: The Cave - Chapter I - The Operation

    Hi, Cupcakes! Mage here to do long overdue, promised review! I'm so sorry for taking so long to do this! So let's get to it, shall we? You have such ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thunder and Ice Chapter 1 ~ The Lightning Talon

    Hi, felistia! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? Once again, I love the description and your writing style. It entices the reader ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Thunder and Ice Prologue ~ A Heart of Ice

    Hi, felistia! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? I loved this story! Not only do I love that it's all about dragons, ...

    Jul 31, 2016
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Search For Peace Book 1 ~ The Great Separation Chapter 1

    Hi, Tsunami! Mage here to do the promised review! So let's get to it, shall we? I'm interested in seeing how this story will progress. You still have been hooked, ...

    Jul 31, 2016


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