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  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 2.3

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I apologize in advance if my review isn't helpful. I didn't have any problems with your overall grammar, so I'll focus on other parts of the chapter. I ...

    Aug 1, 2017
  • Short Story » Satire, General Re: Classical Mythology: How It Should've Happened

    Hello, Dracula! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 31, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fanfiction, Romantic Re: My Demonic Instinct Chapter 1.1

    Hello, DemonGoddess! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 30, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: Contest Entry: The Chosen Grandma (first 1000 words, revised)

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 29, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don't lose me, follow me home) : 3/4

    Hello, mephistophelesangel! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 28, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.2

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 27, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 2/4

    Hello, mephistophelesangel! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 27, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 2.2

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 25, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction Re: Until the Stars Go Out (1)

    Hello, regismare! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 24, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Supernatural, Teen Fiction Re: There's So Much More To Juno Moon: chapter 13

    Hello, marms! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 23, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Humor Re: The Chosen Grandma, Chapter 12.1

    Hello, BlueAfrica! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 22, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Narrative Re: Chapter 2.1 (Homeland Security)

    Hello, TheSilverFox! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 21, 2017
  • Short Story » Realistic, General Re: She Likes Girls

    Hello, gxldencrxwns! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 20, 2017
  • Short Story » Narrative, Mystery / Suspense Re: (so don’t lose me, follow me home) : 1/4

    Hello, mephistophelesangel! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 19, 2017
  • Novel / Chapter » Fantasy, Action / Adventure Re: Hunter: Chapter 3.1 - Agrona [Edited]

    Hello, FalconryGirl9086! I'm here to review your work! I'm sorry in advance if my review isn't all that helpful. I'm trying to become a better reviewer, but I'm still not ...

    Jul 18, 2017


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