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  • Poetry » Humor, Horror
    Re: Exam Day

    hi i'm OBSESSED with this poem. it's been so long since i formally took an exam like that but this whole experience feels so familiar . i love how it's ...

    May 15, 2023

  • Poetry » Literature, General
    Re: As the Clock Ticks

    Hi HB1103! I'm here to review your poem. Apologies in advance if this review is a little unpolished—it's been a bit since I reviewed. As someone who has recently been ...

    May 6, 2023

  • Poetry » Humor, General
    Re: Document

    Hi Lim! It's been a long time since I read a fun, silly poem like this, so I just had to try my hand at reviewing it. One of the ...

    Sep 5, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, Narrative
    Re: my younger self

    Hi Ladybug! I'm here to review your poem. One of the first things I noticed about this poem was how short it was. Which absolutely isn't a bad thing: it ...

    Sep 5, 2022


  • Hi mothbroth! I always love your poetry and know this poem is a heavier one from the quick skim I did before rereading it today, so I hope this review ...

    Sep 5, 2022

  • Poetry » Fantasy, General
    Re: Water Magic

    Hi Lim! I'm here to review your poem. :) First things first: I love how fun this poem is! The combination of your word choice and formatting really fits the ...

    Sep 5, 2022

  • Poetry » Realistic, General
    Re: Crop Top

    Hi Wisteria! You were kind enough to leave the first review on one of my new poems, so I thought I'd return the favor with a review on this one.

    Sep 3, 2022

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Lyrical
    Re: Crusader

    Hi aooborromeo, I was looking for a poem to review and found this one sitting in the Green Room. After reading through it and discovering the twist at the end, ...

    May 30, 2021

  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy
    Re: Return Of The Heir Prologue

    Hi TheMythMaster! It's been a bit since I reviewed a novel, so I thought I'd check out yours. c: I'll start with the prologue's plot. I really like how you ...

    May 30, 2021

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: That One Time We Strategically Used a Bathroom in Battle Part 2

    Hi Harry! I'm back with another review. :) Vankous spluttered, his shield flickering from a moment from his break in concentration. "WHAT??" he demanded. Vankous being done with everything Harry ...

    May 27, 2021

  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, Science Fiction
    Re: That One Time We Strategically Used a Bathroom in Battle Part 1

    Hi Harry! I'm not sure if I'll be able to review both parts of this bathroom adventure today, but I wanted to read/review at least one part of it today~ ...

    May 27, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Realistic
    Re: these fairytales aren't the same

    Hi chikara! I had to pause between reading this poem and starting this review because dang . This poem was absolutely amazing! It feels like you found the sweet spot ...

    May 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Other, General
    Re: cruelty is genetic

    Hi mel, It's been a little bit since I last reviewed poetry, so I apologize in advance if this review is a little rough. But this poem really resonated with ...

    May 16, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, General
    Re: shutting down internal server

    As someone's who first real introduction to the internet was playing on Minecraft servers and writing Minecraft fanfiction over on fanfiction.net, I just had to review this poem! I love ...

    Jan 31, 2021

  • Poetry » Dramatic, Romantic
    Re: Bye

    Hi ChesTacos! I'm here to review your poem this Review Day~ I was intrigued by the title and the description of your poem, so I thought I'd take a look. ...

    Jan 31, 2021


pain is that feeling when you are feeling hurt, but it never goes away leaving me hurt. oh it hurts.
— Dragonthorn