MRHILL92

I have some other stuff you might like Wisegirl. I have a Fantasy story in my portfolio called The Flames Will Rise Again. And I'm posting a Power Rangers re-imagining ...

I get what you mean by mysogynistic, but that was the point. The kid is terribly mysogrynistic. He's deluded himself into thinking this girl is his soulmate. And he barely ...

Thanks so much.

I love all the responses. I got pretty lukewarm responses. at WritersNet. They pretty much made it clear they didn't like this or get it. You guys however, provided some ...

My favorite lines: "This perfect angel who found me, among the ash and snow. And for it with out a doubt, I know I love her so. I don't know ...

I'm sorry Penguin, I'm not very good with poems, but I will say that I liked this. Everyone else has seemed to post their own great reviews, and they're more ...

I liked it. There was poetry in your words, and the voices were riveting. I'd like to see more from you.

It wouldn't be fair to call this post a review, because everyone has already posted what I wanted to. I just came here to say job well done. Amazing piece, ...

Thank you, and thank God for review day. You're right about the "fucking god," bit. Thanks.

I will not be continuing this for a long time anyway. It needs major revision. The first part of course. Thank you. I also felt I tried to hard.

Thank you very much.

Thank you very much Deanie, and the ending is only that way because this was supposed to be a prologue. I'm gonna have to change it around though, because I ...

First sentence, I may be wrong here, but I believe your very first sentence, %u2018The forest was rank with the scent of dead men%u2019 may be a little awkward or/and ...

Thanks. It's going to be different though. I feel mad because I already sent this version into my teacher, and it almost doesn't make any sense. Oh well.

But of course, MehPandaEyes, if you're being serious, then sorry about that.