MBrooks

Alright, works like this are always hard to review. As well as the fact that I am really jealous because it never works when I try to put a picture ...

I think this is kind of childishly written. Also, 'killed' not 'kilt' Hee hee This work needs editing. Your enjambement isall over the place and it doesn't make sense why ...

So... you decided to make a rip off from Twilight I assume? well, since I love Twilight, I am going to try and keep my opinion to myself when reading ...

You have a very interesting writing style. I like the feel of this poem as a read, very good narration but I think it lacks the imaginative qualities of imagery. ...

Whoa. So this work is really heavy going on the sex factor. XD I think you are a good writer, but you need to ensure that you provide enough description ...

At first, I was wondering who the characters were here, then I realised that it was all very metaphorical. '"You know, only humans and nature have the power to touch ...

Oooh, so this is about Halloween??? No. But I thought that from that title. A little bit misleading, but it seems cool. :) Each paragraph has a topic sentence with ...

Hee hee The title of this work sounds like a weather forecast. XD 'A friend told me I should try writing again... Believe me if you will I did.' They ...

Strong story. I like that. 'As she thought about all this, she realized it wasn't her fault that any of this had happened. It didn't do any good to go ...