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Why do girls fight so dirty?? i can totally feel how much you hate this chick, is she real? it must suck to be a girl.

that's awesome, truly awesome. it reminds me of this shel silverstine poem about loosing weight. was this derived from real life? and if so, way sorry dude

I like it, partly because I understand exactly where your coming from, id like to read that series because I feel like i would have short story's maybe the same ...

dude thats messed... but also terrific. I think you should take out the whole second to last paragraph. the last lines tell that story. great piece though.

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA. I like the end. i really think you should explain more about what actually happened, like is it jail, or an asylum? I would also love to read more, ...

DUDE YOU'RE F#CKED UP! I LOVE IT, ITS HILLARIOUS

Dude! that is frickin good! i don't have much criticism but i absolutely love the first verse Every day I drive My car To work So I can pay To ...

umm.. that was kind of depressing, but it was a very creative style that i enjoyed. you may want to work on where the "bad mad" came from? dose the ...

dude! that was so messed up i started laughing hysterically. I'm not saying it was bad I'm just saying, it was so insane i didn't know what else to do

its not based off a particular event but ya your right i do have knowledge o f the situation

yes Charlie, is in fact, a boy lol

ya iknow i was totally pissed off when i wrote it, but i some how got a good grade so

i ment to say it has to be i was not iwas

wow, that was pretty good, i like the normal problems like getting a step father put into (what im asuming because of the unicorn) a fantasy world

wow really nice, i love it i can totally feel the build up of a great story, pm me when you have part two