Lydia1995

Hello! I see someone already got in the nit-picks before me. Don't say that this fails!! Because it dosn't, it is very good, paticularly with the formatting off it, which ...

Hello Kayay :D I really liked this and like Snicker said your rhymes make sense and don't seem too forced. There are some mistakes, mostly punctuation towards the end but ...

Hello! I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer for today :) Firstly Welcome To YWS. You have come to a good place were people can help you to improve ...

Vanadis, This is pretty good. The rhythm was a bit out but for someone who dosn't generally write poetry this is great! Well Done! I loved it aticularly some of ...

Hello White! I see that everyone has pulled this apart already so I'll just say that I liked it. You portrayed the emotion of the only girl without a boyfriend ...

Hello! As others I liked it, I was a bit dissapointed with the end though. 'He wins' seemed a bit anit-climatic. You could put something really dramatic in here for ...

Hello, I liked this, but I think that if you really want to portray your emotions, tell us how you felt leaving. I know the feeling of moving house, and ...

Hello, I really like this, it has a clear message, that yes you don't always get what you deserve and that love is never easy. So i really like it, ...

Hello, Welcome YWS Unfortunately I don't have the patience to read all of that, nor the time. I would suggest breaking this up into chapters so that this huge amount ...

Hello! I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer today. :D Ok so to start with I noticed that you haven't done any reviews, try to review more peoples work ...

Hello Dreamy, I liked this, and I actually can't see many things to tear apart with it. I would say though that this line, Perhaps someday in the future It ...

Hello, Welcome to YWS may I just say! :) So yes I think everything has been said really, please extended your story because I would like to know who these ...

Hello! I liked this, well done :) I think you really portrayed the characters emotions and thoughts really well. And your rhythm was consistent thanks to the "a-blahblah." Your rhyme ...

Hello Percy, I'm Lydia and I will be your reviewer! Welcome to YWS :) Ok so firstly I would like to say that I noticed you didn't have any reviews ...

Hello, I really liked this, was I right in thinking that in a way it was two poems in one. Because the rhyme scheme for all the bits about the ...