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Hey there! Alright, this was a really short story. It's even short for a piece of flash fiction if I must say. The first sentence was a thought, or the ...

Hey there! The first paragraph was awesome. It was descriptive in many ways and I liked how you described the city with all the different senses. It brings me to ...

Hey there! I liked this story very much. Although there is only one piece of dialogue, the narration here captures the readers attention very well. I like in particular the ...

Hey there! As with Shino, I'm going to review this paragraph by paragraph. The first paragraph was amazing, it was so descriptive in many forms and the setting clearly showed ...

Hey there! This poem is pretty well done. The rhyming is good and the word choice and phrasing brings about a smooth poem. It has an even length across the ...

Hey there! And I must say this is an interesting piece! The story of writers by a writer! I liked how you describe writers as beings that are "mutually venomous". ...

Hey there! Well this is a really short prologue, but I'm going to do my best! This is really mysterious, and I really want to know more. Who is this ...

Hey there! First of all, I like the idea here. A witch whose parents are both locked up for wrong reasons. And she has to be independent on her own. ...

Hey there! From your style of writing it seems that you're a kid? It was a good attempt for a story but let me point out some things. The pace ...

Hey there! I like that this story was written in this present tense. And somehow it gives a feeling that this will turn into a fantasy story. From all the ...

Hey there! I see you've arrived at the Avengers part! Alright, I like Loki's character in this scene. It's just how it was in the movie. Cold, and cunning. He's ...

Hey there! I find this short story particularly interesting. Writing about being a human from an animals point of view. I liked the descriptive feelings of anger and hatred. The ...

Hey there! Short as this story may be it certainly intrigues me. Not because of the storyline, since this doesn't seem to have any. It's the characters that actually seem ...

Hey there! I really enjoyed this story, especially the twist at end. It was very emotional from the dialogue, and it was dramatic. I liked the character of the father ...

Hey there! Alright, so this story was interesting enough to read. It wasn't that amazing, but it was a decent read. First off, Dark Blade Army is really cliche. And ...