Lycando

Hey there abel! Pretty awesome yet funny story you have here. Wonder if it's true? Lots of people who write short stories have it in the form of either a ...

Hey there! I really liked your story here, it's interesting yet it makes me wonder more. More about the actual storyline of this and where this is headed. Both characters ...

Hey there! First off, can I make sure I understand this story? To me, this is about two lovers, who fell out with each other because the woman cheated on ...

Hey there Sonii. I like your story very much. It's interesting and also shows the actual culture of Indian families. It's pretty informative actually, the way you described it. A ...

Hey there sourdude! I like your idea of two separate worlds the character lives in, one in which his finds his life horrible but another in which he prefers to ...

Hey there Jay! I like your narration throughout this whole chapter, about the heat and such, it shows how the character feels, difficult to breathe, and such. The fighting scene ...

Hey there JayShay! Nice story you have here, the beginning was good enough to capture my attention and you introduced your characters smoothly. By that I mean the necessary descriptions ...

Hey there! I really liked this unique idea of yours, the apocalypse itself is not unique, but the way your character, or you in that case, sees it is. At ...

Hey there! I liked your story, although it was pretty short, you captured the emotions of both the character and other side characters. It was slower paced at the start ...

Hello there! I agree with Lava, I had no idea you were writing from a horse's POV until you said so. :P I like the way you describe the way ...

Hey there Ionut! First of all, I see this is a letter, which tells us the history of the relationship between these two characters. And also it's organized in a ...

Hey there Cutler! Now this is a really short story, and I do agree with methirr. Where's the conflict in this? In every story there has to be a beginning, ...

Hey there Noelle! First off I want to say that I enjoyed this story. But I think this story could have been improved in certain areas, let me explain. Cliches, ...

Hey there Shelby! First of all, I want to say that I liked your story. But please, go easy on my eyes, it's hard to read all of it without ...

Hey there it's Lycando here to review! Well first off, I like this story. The sound..interesting. It's really a unique way of telling a story, based on one subject, the ...