Lunasol21

I simply adore this poem. I'm not usually a fan of rhyming, but I think it attributed to the dream-like and light-hearted tone. It's a relief to read less serious ...

I absolutely adore this poem. The hidden meaning within such a simple topic is astounding. I disagree with previous reviews, this is not shallow at all. You've really captured something ...

Thank you for inspiring me to write again.

Many would call it cliche, but I love it. The imagery was great, and it speaks to all the people who have felt the same. Great read!

I really love this. It's beautiful and the echoing adds a great effect. No criticisms here! Bravo!

My goodness I love this poem. It's simplicity and language is great. The only suggestion I have is to revise some lines to help the flow and add some more ...

I love this poem and I love this title. End of story. It's not much of a review, but I look foward to reading more of your work. Happy writing!

*Tries not to seem like I'm stalking your profile* I love how short and simple this is. It voices the unvocalized heartaches of so many in so few words. Bravo ...

Madness is my favorite too, and the poems are separate.

Don't feel depressed! I write my most scary, twisted, depressing, and morbid poems when I am in the happiest of moods! I really like the short lines, because it creates ...

It's odd, but I like it. Perhaps if you edited it in the future, you would have a fantastic piece. Although, this seems like it belongs under Narrative Poetry...

Like everyone else has said, superb use of imagery. No suggestions on my part, the rhythm and flow of the poem was amazing.!

Thank you, and I plan on expanding on them. Sometimes though, I like to leave them be. Lately, I've been writing really short poems for some reason. And of course, ...

Writer's Block = worst thing ever. I actually like the fact that you repeated wishing and waiting throughout the poem. It created a steady rhythm that made the poem seem ...

I think punctuation would help create a better rhythm in the poem, but the language and repetition added a great effect.