Luke14

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From reading this, I feel like the tree could symbolize life, or a life, a specific one. One that has fallen from a once good place. People stood and stared, ...

No problem, i'll be sure to read whatever you have next!

Thank you so much! I will get right on my corrections.

Well disapear meaning to go away, it's saying what difference because the speaker is asking how would it be any different if he were not there, considering he believes he ...

These were a mistake

Thank you so much!! Your definatly right, I did write this at a dark time. But it was so purely from that time, that I didn't want to make changes, ...

Thank you for the review! I'm glad you came back to review one of my little old poems. I do tend to take some liberties when writing, so you got ...

Thank you!! Your review was really helpful.

Your absolutely right! I should have read this through. I completely forgot about the bullet thing. Thank you for your review, now I have a detailed guide of what to ...

Oh your right, I completely forgot to create paragraphs! But thank you for the review! I found it most helpful.

Your right about the apostrophe, thank you for catching that. And I understand the repitition, but this isn't just a poem, it's lyrics. The repitition is the result of a ...

This poem, these lyrics, this piece of literature is the definition of art. And soon, I will return to give it a full review, which is what it deserves.

Thank you, your kindness greatly appreciated. Also, I like your profile picture.