Lucky_Duck

Thanks! Actually, those "dead"s aren't supposed to be there. I was working on my little brother's computer and he has this program that puts the word dead after the word ...

Hi there! I really like this. Self-love is super important. I think the sentences flowed like a stream of consciousness, but were occasionally too wordy. I would love to see ...

I actually think that you should get rid of the 'La la la la...' thing... It just bugs me. Anyway, I agree with starry about the descriptions... Hope you have ...

That was funny... It seems to me that we don't get very many limericks around here. Good job Mesh and Mesh's mom!! --Lucky

Oh yeah, You are right... oh well, that was just a suggestion anyway.. Thanks ST --Lucky

First of all,I'm not going to attack you for that, even though I'm an extreme Edward fangirl, but I still think everyone has the right to voice their opinion. And ...

This isn't a real crit. because I'm, like, uber tired so... That was really good. I only really have one Q: Are they vampires? Please answer me so that I ...

... when you grace me with your presence ...

Yeah, I agree with Azila, It's pretty good, but you need to "clarify your message". Happy Writing!!

I'm not really gonna crit. this based on punctuation or spelling or the rhyme, etc. I just want to say that it has a great message. "Don't Drink and Drive!" ...

...that you love me... **Hey cat4prowl! We are next door neighbors!(la la land)

That was really good. I liked the message that it sent. good luck and hope to hear more of you!! --Lucky

That was really good. I can relate to having a friend move away, watching the friendship crumble over a long distance. Really good. Liked the message (again probably because I ...

That was really good. So far I'm kinda interested yet sort of bored, nothing has happened yet. Anyway PM me I'm on. See ya soon! --Lucky

sorry, I was a little tired when I read it, but it makes sense now. Hope to hear more from you --Lucky