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Savage rain...like rain collecting..

The reason I put peter pan was that through out his story he's inspirational, but as a side note that's why I put (A broken bird) thank you for the ...

Thank you :)

Yeah that's my main problem. :P My English teacher teaches me squat, I just feel I throw a rhyme scheme where it needs to go.

Heh, yeah I know, the rhyme scheme is patchy. The reason why is I'm not really "trained" so to speak in literary writing, I just love putting a message in ...

Thanks xD and I like to change the rhyme scheme to suit each stanza, kinda free lance it

How x3

SO MANY ERRORS so sorry, for one it's "Bearing a huge hole." and "You've never given me a thing." again sorry....

Heh a lot about liquor. xD Nice job though. Your representations are very clear and the point is throughout the poem. Very well done! I felt it was a story, ...

My favorite! :D You should do more styled like this, it's righteous. You would never believe where you get your inspiration from. Lool, when you told me it was from ...

Lool, I just realized this was yours. :P I still love it though. :D It's so deep. But in a good way. :)

I love this! It displays truth, hurt, and optimism. This is amazing, it actually spoke about everything I was just feeling. The similes personified human feelings to create a materialistic ...

So deep. I like it! :D I'm new but you're definitely one to follow. I like how you referred to an eye, truly.

Wow. I think it's truly amazing like I told you! :P Don't worry! But I really like the poem though. Keep up the good work.~