LovelyTeaRoses

Please work on the grammar. I love what you're trying to say. It's such a wonderful metaphor. It's such a shame that it's wasted on such poor grammar. I also ...

There are a couple things wrong with this poem. It's too bland, it's grammatically incorrect, and the font is wwwwaaaaayyyy too small. This poem is too generic. Not every poem ...

Just a quick bit of advice, I think it should be she is Death. It just sounds better that way.

I really don't like this, sorry. It's hard to read and the grammar is all skewed. I understand not using perfect grammar in poetry, but this is just in need ...

I don't mean to offend you but I didn't like this poem at all. It shows promise, I won't lie. However, it's just not interesting. Who is this about? What ...

This is a good poem but it's hard to read and that's a shame. It's like you tried to use enjambment but it didn't work because it didn't make sense. ...

There are a lot of grammatical errors in this poem. I'm going to copy and paste parts that need work. "when will peace arrive?," There doesn't need to be a ...

If you don't mind a bit of constructive criticism, I would like to offer some. The rhyme is a bit like a stilted version of Poe's. The rhyme is simple, ...