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Re: Those Little Glass Slippers (15)
This has been going on since I was a Novice! Im so glad to see you have such dedication! I just wanted to stop in and say gratz! You should ...
Nov 17, 2009 -
Re: Made In China Prolouge
Just try to put in more detail on your characters, surroundings, and the situation, and you should be okay. Try rewriting this and re-posting, and when you do message me. ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Missing Autumn pt.2
Yeah, sorry, I had that 'out' instead of 'our' problem in my story "Nanali". I seem to make that mistake a lot. I am working on it though, thanks for ...
Nov 7, 2009 -
Re: Shadow Kissed pt.1
Yeah, sorry. :oops: I type 'out' why I try to put 'our' lots of times. It's a problem I have.
Nov 5, 2009 -
Re: Missing Autumn
Should I put this under Romantic Fiction?
Oct 15, 2009 -
Re: Dear Juliet...
Thank you all for commenting, part two is now up. I made the corrections and I hope that makes the story better. I am also working on the characters, and ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Schizophrenia pt.2 :D
He dosen't have a book. he finds a book in the mirror The girl has one eye, she cries out of that one. The smell he says puts the girls ...
Oct 3, 2009 -
Re: Schizophrenia
About to post part number two! Comment, Nit-pick, tell me how much you like it, tell me how much you hate it with a burning passion. I. Don't. Care. Just ...
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: Schizophrenia
Oh, it seems as if it is time for another spoiler! *Evil laugh* Rayne is a Helper. He has to help ghosts find peace. The girl is not really Rayne's ...
Oct 2, 2009 -
Re: The Difference Between Day and Night
Hello, Miss Summer Night at your serviceā„ Okay, I actually really liked this story. Yes it is kinda Twilight-ish but that really does not bother me. If you write more ...
Jul 4, 2009 -
Re: Tainted Soul pt.3
Sorry about the weird way it's posted. It copied and pasted that way I suppose.
May 29, 2009 -
Re: don't you forget about me. (chapter 1)
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! I loved this piece! It is very original and it drew me in from the first line! I would love to hear more ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: The Cabinet
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! Wow, that was absolutely amazing! Was this a short story? If not I would love for you to PM me if there is ...
May 28, 2009 -
Re: Tainted Soul
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! Thank you for the review Phantom. Obviously I was correct in assuming you'd give me a full review. Thank you for your help. ...
May 26, 2009 -
Re: Tainted Soul
Hi! Miss Summer Night at your service! Yes tnme22, I was considering making the main character a boy, his name, as you soon will discover, is Rayne Valkyre. I picked ...
May 25, 2009