LovelessSummer

I too, Veritas, am tired of ignorance. This is no place for my personal opinions on 9/11, I know this, but please just allow me to say this one quick ...

Hello, Sleepthief. I'm Love. As is the usual for my reviews the nitpicks will be dealt with first. Nitpicks: He coughed, the sound as violent as striking a match, blood ...

Hello, Chocolate, I'm Love. First of all I'd like to get the nitpicks over with, so should we get started? Nitpicks: Mark was kneeling before me with the most beautiful ...

Hello, ReisePiecey. I'm kicking off my return to YWS with a review of your very lovely prologue here. Nitpicks: There was only one small thing that I had to point ...

Hello, Reise. Even though this is a really short passage, I do find myself wanting to read more. Even though I've no idea who's talking, I like your characters voice. ...

Hello, ReisePiecey! Is this true? If so, your little sister is hilarious! They only problem I have if they way you make Kielan say "momma". I guess it can be ...

Hello, Reise. Loveless here to give this a review. Blood splattered the white porcelain floor, staining the glossy tiles a dark and bitter red. This is a nice opening line. ...

Hello Forest! Loveless here to review your story. Well, let's get started. Corrections will be in red, comments and suggestions will be in purple. Ember wiped the sweat away from ...

Hello, Forest! Loveless here to give this poem of yours a review. My lips ache For a gentle kiss To be placed upon my lips Repetition of 'lips' in this ...

Hello, Scream. Loveless here to review this story of yours. Well, let's get started. “Momma,” I said bravely, “Why don’t you tell on Uncle Rob for being so mean all ...

I agree with you. Pit bulls attack just as much as any other dog attacks, you have the same probability of being attack by a loose Yorkie on the street ...

Hello, Sheperd! I'll be reviewing this for you, okay? Well, let's get started. Corrections will be in red and comments and suggestions will be in purple. Three days had passed, ...

Hello! Loveless here to review your story. Well, let's get started. “Hush, little baby, don't you cry,” She sang quietly, “Momma's gonna buy you a mocking bird...” Lowercase the 'S' ...

"Do it!" , she says, with her heart still beating in her hands. "Eat it Vataar." What the H-E-Double hockey sticks? Why is he eating her heart? She needs that ...

Hello, Forever! Just little ol' me here to review your story. Well, let's start. A year, in reality, is not a particular amount of years, days, and weeks. A year ...