LoveIsInTheAir

Hey it's Molly! I really love the deepens of the poem. I can definitely relate to this. I definitely know how it feels when people want you to change and ...

The poem was great, grammar was ok. I was slightly confused with the variation. Also some lines seemed very deep and passionate, but I didn't quite get all of it. ...

This poem is a wonderful combination of mystery, passion, beauty, and depth. I absolutely am in love with the poem. Your grammar is great. The title really caught my eye. ...

Why hello! My name is Molly! I love poetry. This poem is graceful and beautiful! BUT the flow is quite rough and the rhyme scheme only worked every once win ...

I am in love with this poem! I am jealous I didn't think of it first. Each line had such a deep meaning and that is a great accomplishment. The ...

This poem was wonderful! You clearly have deep passion for writing! I also love poems so I can relate and analyze the way you felt while conducting this poem. I ...

Nice job with the poem! I also love poetry so I am great at analyzing the meaning of lyrical statements. The statement "Lights play, and my thoughts obey" really touched ...

I absolutely am in love with this! The detail is exquisite. The story flowed nicely and I could feel the emotion very intensely. I definitely want to read more in ...

I know it's a short poem, but that's how it's supposed to be. You did something very difficult. I was very intrigued by the title, which is a great start. ...

This is a very interesting story. As I read it I could feel every thing you described. It seemed so real. It was like reading a movie (that doesn't really ...

Wow! This story is so dramatic and I love it. The flow is a little rough, but everything can't be perfect (in which I am no where near). I love ...

I am in love with the prologue. It has a mysterious sense to it, which being a teen I can say, attracts young readers from ages 10-27. It just seemed ...