Lost_in_dreamland

Hilarious *claps* absolutely genius :D I love you so much for this :D It was amazing. Hahahah I can't even comment 'cuz my stomach is sore from laughing *lols* crap ...

Hey, Explosive ;) I seem to be on a roll for random pieces of work that appear at the top of the screen as yours did, so let's start. xD ...

I'm not going to do a long poetry critique, so I'm just going to go through some random stuff. Let's start with quotes. xD Depleted comma I am comma So ...

Hey there, Cat :) You were the random piece at the top of the screen. xD Kinda later than the other reviews, but y'no. :D [quote]I drew a smiley on ...

I is here to do a terrible review :P Standing alone Tommy liked to stand alone. When no one was watching, he’d pull a photograph from his pocket; it was ...

Well, there's quite a lot of spelling errors. Methinks you might want them pointed out so I shall do two critiques. This is the first one, which is simply a ...

I really enjoyed this, Angel ;) The characters were well written and interesting. It was so beautiful and moving too. I will do you a review, I promise, hold me ...

Hey(: I'm Kirsten and I shall be your reviewer for today. I really enjoyed this, it had a good flow and worked well. As Angel said, it flowed well and ...

Hey there , I'm Kirsten and I am going to review for today. To begin with I am going to do a basic run over of everything, then we'll move ...

Hey there, I'm Kirsten and I shall be your reviewer for today. I'm going to try a new style of reviewing, so you'll just have to bear with me. I'm ...

Hey there, Krupp ;) I shall do overall comments at the end, just now let's move onto your poem. xD This is my home, dark and wet, the echoes of ...

Hey, I'm Kirsten and I am here to review. No reviews yet? :( Let's change that ;) Okay, onto your poem. xD When skies painted waters azure - breathing, When ...

Destinee, hey and welcome to YWS, I'm Kirsten, or Lost, I shall be your reviewer for today. xD Now, the comments are at the end, for just now, we'll move ...

I liked this poem. You expressed raw emotion well. I thought the same as God; I think it's about money. About how the world is so involved with money. About ...

Okay; Kirsten here to review for you. ;) The comments are at the end, for just now, let's get onto your poem. :) Friends just for now, Other people might ...