LoseControl

Very elegant indeed. I love all of this, and I absolutely agree with every word. The rhythm is excellent, as well. I would add "and" between "cool" and "sweet" in ...

This is excellently written! At first, I was slightly off-put by the lack of paragraphs. But, after reading it, I'm not sure it even needs them. I absolutely love the ...

I immediately "fell in love" with Rahim. Love and jealousy. Two things that are so strong, so strong they can lead to insanity, and even stronger when combined. Adonia still ...

First, I love how you personified your journal beyond "Dear Diary" and actually have a conversation with it. A little nitpick, in the third paragraph under "Reason #1" and in ...

V is my favorite letter, too! I love this piece because of the celebration of sex, rather than the condemnation of it. I like how it isn't strictly structured, but ...

Wow. It is rare to come across something so short yet so powerful. The message is incredible and very relevant, I feel, in our world today. We seem so obsessed ...

That almost made me cry. It is beautifully written. The words are pieced together wonderfully and seemingly effortlessly, the raw emotion, the confusion, the regret just spilled out over the ...

I have to say that I love this poem. One thing that caught my attention, though, was the switch to past tense in the third line and the second last ...

I love the hasty and informal way this is written, it really helps you get into Jimmy's mind. There are a few typos, but that's nothing that can't be fixed! ...