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  • Poetry » Humor, Realistic Re: I'm a Poet

    Alright! I didn't know to expect that! Good job! XD You are indeed 'A poet' a very interest way to go about it. I’m a poet, And I know it, ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » Mystery / Suspense, Fantasy Re: Darker than black...

    Alright, =3 Very, dark. Kind of reminds me of that Animals song "Paint it Black" After a quick skim of your poem It is a'questionare, a strive. Nice rhythm too ...

    May 26, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Fire Within

    This was an emotional, and symbolic poem which is pretty well thought out. =3 It has very good descriptive qualities, and it levels with the reader. Very easy to digest ...

    Apr 30, 2013
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Tweety Tweety

    Alright, that is a nice little poem. I'm not a bird fan =3 But I do understand. Alright here is the review. "Tweety tweety my beautiful bird tweet tweety one ...

    Apr 29, 2013
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: ...breaking down

    Short sweet, and to the point. Very nice =3 I like shorter poems because they are easily remembered, and pressure the author to convey more with less. That said, you ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Romantic, General Re: The feeling of "more"

    "The strangest feeling when I look at you, A feeling so innocent, strong and true, A feeling so confusing to my heart, A feeling maybe only on my part?" Alright ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Fantasy, General Re: If I became a ghost

    Alright it has a lot of Pizazz, and moxie. I like the thought, =3 it really gave me a lot to imagine. A lot of like terms and comparisons in ...

    Apr 28, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Wired Tiger

    Alright, Symbolism..... HOLY GOAT!.... Or did I mean Cow? Something so small and obvious, but a fun idea. It was entertaining thru and through, and thoroughly so. A lot of ...

    Apr 25, 2013
  • Poetry » Narrative, Culture Re: Selkie

    This is... Good? A bit depressing, and an accurate depiction of humanities condition. IT is also a good depiction of the Celtic folklore. I do have a few nitpicks with ...

    Jul 24, 2012
  • Poetry » Romantic, Dramatic Re: For You

    Ok this is short 'sweet' and to the point Its a good narrative. It gives me a sense of knowledge at the same time, it feels like something is missing. ...

    Jul 20, 2012
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Walking Home

    This is the very extent of the social experience of advanced education. I applaud you for taking the time to write it. Yes it is a very long piece, a ...

    Oct 16, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Hands full of Heart-beats.

    This grabbed my attention, it was well planned and It was easy to keep reading. I like this. It had a certain relevance, all the visual referrence, comparing to a ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Die by the Gun

    Not my cup of tea - I find that it is a an elaborate idea, that will require alot of hammering. Do not let this sway you, as I forsee ...

    Oct 14, 2011
  • Poetry » Lyrical, General Re: Cry Sweet Child

    woah, It has a nice rythm, nice flow The message is, how do I say this, Beautiful? Touching at the least. Its not pretending to be an epic, this is ...

    Oct 12, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Rambling

    That is indeed deep However when I read it, its kind of.... Klunky? It has a definitive flow, however its a forced flow? In no way to take from the ...

    Oct 11, 2011


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