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Re: I'm a Poet
Alright! I didn't know to expect that! Good job! XD You are indeed 'A poet' a very interest way to go about it. I’m a poet, And I know it, ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Darker than black...
Alright, =3 Very, dark. Kind of reminds me of that Animals song "Paint it Black" After a quick skim of your poem It is a'questionare, a strive. Nice rhythm too ...
May 26, 2013 -
Re: Fire Within
This was an emotional, and symbolic poem which is pretty well thought out. =3 It has very good descriptive qualities, and it levels with the reader. Very easy to digest ...
Apr 30, 2013 -
Re: Tweety Tweety
Alright, that is a nice little poem. I'm not a bird fan =3 But I do understand. Alright here is the review. "Tweety tweety my beautiful bird tweet tweety one ...
Apr 29, 2013 -
Re: ...breaking down
Short sweet, and to the point. Very nice =3 I like shorter poems because they are easily remembered, and pressure the author to convey more with less. That said, you ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: The feeling of "more"
"The strangest feeling when I look at you, A feeling so innocent, strong and true, A feeling so confusing to my heart, A feeling maybe only on my part?" Alright ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: If I became a ghost
Alright it has a lot of Pizazz, and moxie. I like the thought, =3 it really gave me a lot to imagine. A lot of like terms and comparisons in ...
Apr 28, 2013 -
Re: Wired Tiger
Alright, Symbolism..... HOLY GOAT!.... Or did I mean Cow? Something so small and obvious, but a fun idea. It was entertaining thru and through, and thoroughly so. A lot of ...
Apr 25, 2013 -
Re: Selkie
This is... Good? A bit depressing, and an accurate depiction of humanities condition. IT is also a good depiction of the Celtic folklore. I do have a few nitpicks with ...
Jul 24, 2012 -
Re: For You
Ok this is short 'sweet' and to the point Its a good narrative. It gives me a sense of knowledge at the same time, it feels like something is missing. ...
Jul 20, 2012 -
Re: Walking Home
This is the very extent of the social experience of advanced education. I applaud you for taking the time to write it. Yes it is a very long piece, a ...
Oct 16, 2011 -
Re: Hands full of Heart-beats.
This grabbed my attention, it was well planned and It was easy to keep reading. I like this. It had a certain relevance, all the visual referrence, comparing to a ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Die by the Gun
Not my cup of tea - I find that it is a an elaborate idea, that will require alot of hammering. Do not let this sway you, as I forsee ...
Oct 14, 2011 -
Re: Cry Sweet Child
woah, It has a nice rythm, nice flow The message is, how do I say this, Beautiful? Touching at the least. Its not pretending to be an epic, this is ...
Oct 12, 2011 -
Re: Rambling
That is indeed deep However when I read it, its kind of.... Klunky? It has a definitive flow, however its a forced flow? In no way to take from the ...
Oct 11, 2011
