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hello there , Seems like you requested a review ... and a review you shall get! Hee hee Lorna xx Questions in the Darkness Why talk when nobody would listen, ...

Hello there my name is Lorna and I will be reviewing you today!! I Love poems which are short and to the point but get the message across perfectly and ...

Hello there, WOW! First things first .. if this was your first poem then WOW! ... My first poem was pants compared to this ... ;3 I can really relate ...

Hello there, The first thing that dragged me here is the title .... as you could probably see from my own style of writing I love this type of poetry ...

As this is your first piece of poetry I say well done! As a first piece it both captures and interests the reader. Brilliant story and emotion . Love how ...

Hello there, I loved this poem .. its short sweet and to the point ... just how I mostly write! The only fault I could find was how the poem ...

hello Stela , My name is Lorna! And I like your writing style ;3 But I was feeling all emotional, and isn't that the best time to be writing poetry? ...

Hello there, My first impressions of this poem were how deep and dramatic it is ;3 Then as I read on I realise that it is much more then that ...

Hello there, When I saw the name of your poem I was thinking about a completely different type of poem but you surprised me with this ! I believe that ...

Hello Sianniiee ;3 , First Impressions: -The first thing that hit me was the use of emotion in the song :) Like/dislike: - I like this song because it is ...

Hello, First Impression: My first impression was that the layout was nice and clear and that you used powerful words when describing emotions. Good Things: - The clear layout - ...

Hello there, First Impression: My first impression of this piece of writing was that it was very very descriptive and had many emotions clearly displayed. Good Things: - The descriptive ...

Just so you know ... I'm not very good at writing reviews! So Please don't be offended or annoyed that I didn't write much. I Like the way you have ...

This is a great poem. There were only 2 flaws that I could find... 1. Where are the emotions?? Most poems have loads of emotion in them .... but if ...

If you dont mind me asking ....... What type of writing is this? (poem , story , song ect) I think that its pretty deep .... but not too deep. ...