LordZeus

Hey Zeus here to review for the Gamma Police! All hail the Gamma Police! Ok and now for the review: All in all, this was a good story, but there ...

Alright, Zeus here to review on behalf of the Gamma Police! All hail the Gamma Police! I've read all the chapters of this fanfiction, and they're very good. Only this ...

I'm here again to review for the Gamma Police! All hail the Gamma Police! Ok and now for the review: First off, yet gain this was a good work, but ...

Hey its Zeus here to review for the Gamma Police! All hail the Gamma Police! OK and now for the review. I have to say, it was a good story, ...

Hahaha this is so funny! But seriously, it is hard to think about what teachers do when they're not teaching isn't it? I most certainly could not imagine my grumpy ...

Look, Kay, I have read all six of these 'Good little soldier' chapters, and I have noticed that you have a weird tendency to use 'ey' and 'eir' instead of ...

Hi Zeus here to review. First off, before I start to review this very good poem, I have noticed that you have just joined the Young Writers Society today. So...Welcome ...

wow, this is really funny! I personally have read all the Lord of the Rings books, and watched all the movies. while those were often dark and depressing, you turned ...

Hi it's Zeus here to review! I have to say, this is a nice story. I can totally relate to at least the first part (about the girl) except I ...

Hi, its Zeus here to review! I have to say, this is a great story! I like how you show what your protagonist is thinking, and how you spaced out ...

HI it's Zeus here to review! If you've read any of my works (highly unlikely) you'll know that my main writing genre is science fiction, and it's also one of ...

This is a really great poem! It summarizes high school in a really cool and humorous way! It makes me think of a shy kid, who gets teased and doesn't ...

Very good! I have to say that your poem really struck truth. It spoke to a deeply personal topic, and spoke it with a nice rhythm. In Fact, when I ...

Wow, great job in finishing your first story! I have got to say, this is a good one. However, I think you didn't' explain what happened enough. At the end, ...

Wow. That is the First word that comes to my mind aFter reading this. i have read the original norse myths, but this tells it in a much more absorbing ...