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Griffin, you beat me to the cut! Curses, I can only echo your words now. *Echoes Griffin's Words* And to add: While I understand it's very poetic and helps the ...

Great poem. I like the ending best (In a non-insulting way :P) I think there was a bit too much repetition. Generally if you can see words being repeated even ...

Yeah, Snoink, by convincing her to join your evil army. And yes, I am organizing a resistance... maybe Bolt can lead? Heya, Hero here! I'm gonna Like this. Why? Because ...

I hate this and have no good feedback, therefore I will not comment. Sorry, I just had to make a joke from that. In reality I really think this was ...

Hm... this was near perfect. I think you need to work on getting focus. I especially liked your line about looking in the mirror. I think the best thing to ...

Perfect. Only one thing to say. You made the same little mistake that irritated me about the Percy books. Something that cost it perfection! Along with Maximum Ride and Daniel ...

Heya, hero here. Vast, thanks for the nitpicking :D Alright, first thing. I don't know if you chose lyric format at the bottom but to be honest I can't stand ...

Hero here, hear Hero! I think this was rather nice. Let me say that it's quite hard to review bad poetry, contrary to belief, or at least in my opinion. ...

To make a play on the above reviewers name, that was SImply the Best! Ba, pa, pa, paaa. Better than all the rest! Ba,pa,ba,ba... This is really what I feel ...

*LIKES* First ever poet? Really? Make sure you get better, you'll be having twenty-eight likes by your twelfth poem. I'm not entirely sure what to make of this poem. I ...

Heya, Hero here! Cool avatar by the way :D Alright, I have to say that this poem failed to get me down. I hope that was your aim. And no, ...

Heya. I liked this but it felt very light and lacked a... what's the right word? Genre? In other words I couldn't tell what age group this was targeted at. ...

Heya, Hero here for a review. So I can only really say that I didn't understand this poem. I am quite horrible at understanding more than one thing at a ...

I disagree, CardDragon :P The rhyming wouldn't have done much, but it could have done something. I say that only because of your last stanza. Nice rhyme. I think this ...

I don't think this poem was up to what it could be. So many people rattle away about memories but I think you were getting at something. While I understand ...