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Hi, I'm gonna review this today. I loved your description of her crying. Your main character felt strong and I felt like I knew her well. I already performed a ...

Hopefully this won't be so useless. First of all... *LIKES* Secondly... *DISCLAIMER* This is YOUR poem and you are free to do what you want. Feel free to ignore anything ...

Hey, here to review. Okay, so you got this by being inspired by the photo, right? I need to ask you if you think you really portrayed what's in the ...

Don't get me wrong, I really love the poem. It is awesome. I just thought it could be better. But it is your poem. I didn't mean to offend you ...

My smile started growing slowly as I read this. At a point I was thinking, I should totally tell you to not rhyme in the poem and then I read ...

I'll come back later and do a proper review, but right now just one question: how can she be happy if she went to Hell. I assumed she did because ...

Okay, firstly I must say that your initial presentation was a bit deterring. The only good thing about the lack of paragraphs was that it showed just how short the ...

Rainbow! Soulkana! Give it a like, darnit! The picture is getting better more red ever where. The picture is getting darker its getting hard to see. This part didn't flow ...

I agree with formertywcwriter but not too much. I think putting it in the sci-fi forum is adequate. While I'm not a short story expert, I think that they're meant ...

That was great. I'm sorry to change the aim of your poem but the ending was too cliche for my liking. It first I was smiling brightly. I pictured a ...

Heya! Congrats on your first poem. This is one small step ImABookPerson, one giant leap for ImABookPerson...kind :D We all start with poetry like this. I had a notebook full ...

*Insert rude word here* I wrote this awesome review and now it's gone! *Sigh* Alright, let's get into it. Basically what I wanted to say was that if you want ...

Heya, I'm TheNewHero and I'm Heeer(o) to review your poem. I'll start with just a few key points: The repetition was clearly visible and while it didn't necessarily hurt the ...

Hey! It's you! With the awesome avatar! You have good rhyming skills. I feel you should have drawn much more difference between the two stanzas. Perhaps the first could be ...

Well to add to what Griffin and Persephoneia have said, I think you should describe your friend's sadness a little more. The poem also repeats a lot. I think the ...