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AHHHH! Emma! You're scaring me! *cries* How could you? This is soooo cool though! ~Lollipop~

Awwwww! I agree, this is really cute and your cat must be soooo adorable! ~Lollipop~

One other thing this doesn't make sense the trees waving so slowly and swiftly How can something be moving slowly and swiftly at the same time. Fast and slow? Hmm... ...

And thank you too Reichieru! Maybe I should stick to one character in my future stories! Heehee ~Lollipop~

Awwww! It's soo sad! But it's great at the same time! I think you should continue it! ~Lollipop~

Hey! This is sooo cool! Short but sweet! ~Lollipop~

Way Hay!! Great work Jack! ~Lollipop~

Yeah!! This story was excellent. A really good read. hee hee ~Lollipop~

Hey. This is really good! Good job! ~Lollipop~

Thanks for the info guys. And I'll change my story a little so it's easier to read. I just couldn't think of another way to change perspective. Oh well! Thanks ...

Good Job Emma! I agree with Harley, it was a little hard to tell if the charcter was a boy. Anyway, a good story!! Hee hee! ~Lollipop~

Hey thanks! ~Lollipop~

HEE HEEEEEE! I loved this! Its great. Go the British! ~Lollipop~

Great!! The good thing about this is that the rhyming didn't sound forceful-as it does in other poems. It was also full of emotion. Good job and Keep Writing!! ~Lollipop~

I think this is your best poem yet Rachel!!! I loved it. ~Lollipop~