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I love how you turned a story into a poem of this form. It's really amazing how you were able to make a simple situation into this heartful but an ...

This poem was absolutely beautiful, it's short but gets the point across. It goes well with the title as well As for critics I have a few Only for the ...

I would first like to start by saying that I love how this poem connects with the reader. It brings you into your own mind to think about your own ...

I am genuinely confused about what the heck that means and would love to know more about what it does. It seems interesting but funny at the same if you ...

I would first love to say wow..this was so beautiful and I am sad to say I know how you feel. No not exactly and probably not as bad, but ...

SO this might not be something that needs to be commented on but I like the notes that you took... "here, there and nowhere" And the way that you made ...

So first off I love all the symbolism and the way you show people how it feels to truly have a mask. "a paper mache mask lies between you and ...

I would first like to say I love the take on this poem. I feel like It's a comparing type way of thinking. Are you talking about a real storm?? ...

The keyboard smashes are a great way of explaining emotions and how people feel on a daily basis. I also get so many of the words " i don't know ...

I feel that it isn't the poem I should reflect on but the words you wrote in the description. You see I feel the same way. I never had a ...

"Dumb block to men, you are called "Illiterate" " This was a great way to show what being an eraser truly is. It seems like they are worthless to many ...

"keep your problems at a personal stage don´t let anyone in they´ll only use you..." I love this part, I feel it every day. It's like this feeling that you ...