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RandomTalks here with a review!
I hope this finds you in good health.
Wow...This was such a powerful and personal poem. It has a really strong voice that kind of makes you listen until it is done and then you have nothing but these conflicting thoughts in your head. I like how simple it was and straight forward. It raises a big and important issue with a personal touch that many people can relate to. I am not one of those people, but I still felt the strength of this poem, and I think that is what makes it more beautiful.
Youre not a mother,
you never were
giving birth doesnt automatically make you one
being a parent does.
This part was so honest and so true, and I completely agree to it one hundred percent. Giving birth to someone doesn't automatically give you the right to claim them and it most definitely does not make you a mother. Blood does not define who your family is, but relationships do. The kind of parent and person you are determines the kind of mother you are, and if you are no parent to your child, then you are no mother either.
I noticed somewhere the "would've" does not have the 'd' in it, but otherwise, the grammar was alright. Even if it wasn't I feel like it wouldn't have mattered. This poem comes from the heart.
It is beautiful and raw and honest and it hits differently.
Keep writing and I wish you all the luck in life!
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