On Wednesday per year,
at the arcing of the Lenten calendar,
Catholics allow themselves
a moment of holy face painting.
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Just wanted to stop by and say how much I really enjoyed this poem~
"a moment of holy face painting" omg I'm--
This is almost like a Shel Silverstein poem for Catholic adults and I love it.
I may also be slightly giggling about the confusion in the commentsHi @CaptianJack I'm here to do a real short review on this. Okay I have to agree with @LiviK on the hole I'm confused thing, but let's try to get un confused shell we. So let's get right into it.
Okay I'm trying to understand were you coming form with this, but I'm really not sure am afraid. So I guess maybe you got some nice face paint and you like face painting.
So that's it for this, I'm sorry about my review, you maybe need some help getting all of your thoughts for this on to the paper? <33 I'd love to hear what you meant when you wrote this poem.
I hope you have a great day/night witch ever side of the world your on.
@Dossereana Flying Over The Green Room And Spreading Shards Of Encouragement
I am genuinely confused about what the heck that means and would love to know more about what it does. It seems interesting but funny at the same time...So if you wouldn't mind explaining further or I don't know just not responding at all (jk don't do that) and letting me learn more that would be fun!! I am also confused why this is in the poetry section but yeah you could also explain that too if you are really up to it!! thx in advance (i don't wanna dance- sry lol) But that is officially all that I have to say. A good day to you *bows*