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You, my friend, just made my day. I've read all of the Twilight series, and each one makes me have several gigglefits. It's just so... vampire cheesy. I loved your ...

I really like this! It's a bit confusing at first though, I had to read it twice and the second time more slowly. I like that you're not quite sure ...

Hey, WriterChick, I'm Ellie and I'm going to review your story! Overall, it was pretty exciting, and really made me want to read more. If you shortened it up a ...

Beautiful. It's one of those things that's like, "Man, why didn't I write that?" You have a gift, and it seems natural. I love how you described everything so differently ...

This is a really nice piece! I like how you wrote it in second person, that's usually a very tricky writing style, but you aced it. It was interesting and ...

Terrific! I would change just two things, at the beginning you have "Ok here is my poem" in bold. I would edit it and make it to where you have ...

Amazing! Simply, amazing! I would love to read more when you have it available! You're incredibly talented, it's great! People basically already got the whole thing about grammar issues, etc ...

That's so incredibly BEAUTIFUL! :D The way it rhymes and flows, it's just perfect. I wouldn't change a single thing if I were you. :) -Ellie :elephant:

I like the overall idea of this paragraph, but it's confusing, and not too easy to read. I'm still staring, wondering. My mind is drifting as I steadily walk towards ...

Hey! I'm Ellie (: and first let me start by saying; incredible. Just plain incredible! At first I didn't really get that they wanted to kill themselves. The knife part ...

Thats it? You're just going to leave everyone HANGING like this?! I loved your story, it seems like everyone else has already covered the grammatical issues, and all. It sounds ...

There were a lot of things wrong with this story. Punctuation wasn't used correctly, the structure was very off, the plot line was messy, and there were a lot of ...

I was confused with this piece, it was hard for me to follow along with. All and all, it's a wonderful poem! But when it said "wings" is where you ...