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Re: Shade Users-Prolouge
I really love this and can not wait until you come out with the chapters for it. It was a great read, that captured the details of the scene perfectly. ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: No Parking
I like this. I had to get used to it. But I really like. It explains how much we are told "no." And how limited we are. I feel like ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Acceptance is Not a Lie: Counter Essay to "Christianity is a Lie"
HEY. I love this essay. You know my beliefs, and I just love how this was written because you were (for the most part) not biased. I see so many ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Untitled: Chapter 2
I gotta say I am likin' this story. Only thing. Why did her father feel the need to kill himself? I know that sets up the story, but it just ...
Nov 10, 2014 -
Re: Known Innocence
Wow I really love this poem. You used great words to describe their actions. The only thing I can critique is that you switched tenses for a couple of your ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: Runaway
I really like this poem. The words and ideas used, fit perfectly into the poem. The only thing I can say is, as a reader, I felt it was a ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: Waiting room
I loved this story. I liked the whole idea of it, and they way it was written. Only two things I want to critique. "Life is like a waiting room, ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: Pine Shelter Building.
I really like the idea of this story, but I felt like the whole story was scattered. I was lost while reading some of it. When you were talking about ...
Nov 9, 2014 -
Re: The Dead Body Infront Of Me
First off, I really love this short story. I especially loved the last line. It was a good ending to the passage. I only have a couple of things to ...
Nov 9, 2014