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Re: The last night of winter
This is such a beautiful poem and it's amazing how much it has to give for a shorter piece. It feels like a well deserved break from everything happening in ...
Nov 9, 2024 -
Re: a question
This is such a heartwarming poem. The poem describes well the excitement for starting a relationship and what it feels like to be/fall in love. The first stanza is well ...
Nov 9, 2024 -
Re: childhood hallucinations
Hi! This reminds me a lot of one of my favourite childhood stories: Most Beloved Sister (Allrakäraste syster) from Astrid Lindgren. Except this one doesn't have a happy ending like ...
Sep 26, 2024 -
Re: Have You Heard the Sea?
Hii. After reading this poem I thought I'd leave a quick review! Although the meaning you intended stayed a bit unclear for me I still like this poem. It's comforting ...
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Re: the teachings of a wise maple tree
I really enjoyed reading this and I think you did great job! I like how it slowly shifts from just talking about the leaves to showing the link between them ...
Sep 24, 2024 -
Re: The World Looks Red
I love how it's not too detailed so it gives the reader freedom to choose the meaning behind it and understand the lines in their own way. I also like ...
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Re: the black dog
This hits very close to home and I love the wording. It's a dark subject but it wasn't too heavy to read as you've managed to approach it in a ...
Sep 21, 2024 -
Re: what it feels like to speak, but only hear the echo of your own voice
The poem is very beautiful and I liked it very much. However for me it was quite difficult to read as there is quite many not so simple words one ...
Sep 20, 2024
