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  • Poetry » General, General Re: The last night of winter

    This is such a beautiful poem and it's amazing how much it has to give for a shorter piece. It feels like a well deserved break from everything happening in ...

    Nov 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Literature, Romantic Re: a question

    This is such a heartwarming poem. The poem describes well the excitement for starting a relationship and what it feels like to be/fall in love. The first stanza is well ...

    Nov 9, 2024
  • Poetry » Realistic, General Re: childhood hallucinations

    Hi! This reminds me a lot of one of my favourite childhood stories: Most Beloved Sister (Allrakäraste syster) from Astrid Lindgren. Except this one doesn't have a happy ending like ...

    Sep 26, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Have You Heard the Sea?

    Hii. After reading this poem I thought I'd leave a quick review! Although the meaning you intended stayed a bit unclear for me I still like this poem. It's comforting ...

    Sep 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the teachings of a wise maple tree

    I really enjoyed reading this and I think you did great job! I like how it slowly shifts from just talking about the leaves to showing the link between them ...

    Sep 24, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Horror Re: The World Looks Red

    I love how it's not too detailed so it gives the reader freedom to choose the meaning behind it and understand the lines in their own way. I also like ...

    Sep 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: the black dog

    This hits very close to home and I love the wording. It's a dark subject but it wasn't too heavy to read as you've managed to approach it in a ...

    Sep 21, 2024
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: what it feels like to speak, but only hear the echo of your own voice

    The poem is very beautiful and I liked it very much. However for me it was quite difficult to read as there is quite many not so simple words one ...

    Sep 20, 2024


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