LittleCaroleen

I like how in-depth you went with this. But you missed the points of the story, because you assumed from the start it was about death. Which, it's true that ...

What kind of december are you getting because mine is just white. And cold. And sad. and awful. wanna trade decembers?? :) (by the way the writing is beautiful!)

I love this so so so much!! It's so double sided and amazing. I never read a palindrome before and now I want to read like a million of them. ...

Thanks! I'm glad you were able to relate to it.

Thank you for your review! I'm glad you liked it.

well, the thing is, It's not exactly an essay, which is why it isn't broken down so easily. It's a reflection paper. It's suppose to just talk about me and ...

Ahh okay. Yeah I also saw that in it too. By the way, I love your little icon picture. :)

Oh my goodness. I'm rereading these right now and this was sooo funny.

Thank you. I see now that I've made that mistake, so I'll go and fix that. I thought about naming it "These Four Walls" but I wanted something different. So ...

I think you just broke down some kind of wall with this.

Ohh. I like this...

Eh. Not the exact point I was making. You aren't that attached to it, because like you said, you didn't grow up with it. I didn't either really. I was ...

Well, how it seems strange it's hard for me to put my finger on it. I figured the rhyming was on purpose, because most inconsistent rhyming has a point (especially ...

The first stanza anyways.

Thank you for the review (even if we are in competition). I agree with the spoken words. Much better. I definitely want to add more to this. More stories/opinions, but ...