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  • Poetry » General, General Re: You

    This is wonderful! Enjoyed it very much to read, I especially liked the comparisons with famous artists in music, literature, and art.

    May 29, 2014
  • Other » General, General Re: I am done writing!

    Hey, I'm a writer, too. I've never posted it on YWS, but I have my own friends who review my work. Sure, some comments get me down but I'm not ...

    May 21, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Three hundred and sixty-five days

    That random feel thrown in there though! >~

    May 2, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Lyrical Re: The Martians Killed President Kennedy

    I am so enlightened xD Ha-ha, interesting, humorous take on such a tragic event Dx the irony. And..and...HIGH FIVE WITH DOCTOR WHO BEING PUT IN THAT POEM!

    Apr 12, 2014
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: My Best Friend is Gay.

    Goodness. This was amazing.

    Apr 8, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Satire Re: Dull Pencils

    I see. Excuse the nitpick, but do take it into consideration if you so wish...

    Mar 24, 2014
  • Other » Realistic, Spiritual Re: A letter to myself after everything

    This is a great letter to write for yourself, it could definitely help you to pick yourself up once again.

    Mar 23, 2014
  • Poetry » General, General Re: No More Death

    I loved that ending to the poem! The title also fits in nicely.

    Mar 21, 2014
  • Poetry » Humor, Other Re: This is funny!!!

    Wow. That's some humor you have there xD, very funny. Though, it can be longer and could use a better rhyme scheme. Using a unique rhyme scheme makes any poem ...

    Mar 19, 2014


Light griefs are loquacious, but the great are dumb.
— Seneca