Lionhero333

Hey there, this is a short review of course. But I need the points... You understand. Short and to the point, in fact there was no point its like an ...

The beginning was great. And to be honest this was a strong beginning if I have ever seen one or should I say read one. Im sorry if you were ...

First off I wanna say... Hey how are you? Second I want to say I like the idea of your poem. I was confused but I think that was the ...

First I just want to say say that the title is very coool Your opening is really great. I felt it might've slightly dragged but honestly its perfect. Your descriptions ...

Uh first of all... Ummm... Ok between you and me i could find anything wrong with this. But I need the points so... Yeah. 😄😄😄 This was a good read. ...

Hey there (I dont like to call myself a reviewer but... This is a review and im doing it so...🤔)😁 Anyway, firstly I would like to point out that there ...

Hey there, lets get into it. First things first, I don't knock anybody for grammar/spelling errors. There are obviously some, mainly because this is a rough draft im sure. And ...

This was good. I truly loved the ending and I also like the title. It was a bit hard to figure out who was talking. After a few times I ...

First and foremost I must say that this poem was very very unique. The format really ads to the showmanship and charisma an artist should have, those incorrect spellings totally ...

I new to this so I dont know how good or bad the first draft was compared to this newly revised piece of work, here we go. From my first ...

Really great. Rarely do people(I would even say myself) have that artistic flair. Im not the type to worry about punctuation and grammar mainly for pieces like these that are ...

First I just want to say you have an AMAZING talent. Are you really 15? Its hard to believe reading this. Its vivid and colorful. I felt the emotion in ...

I just wanna say I enjoyed the read and look forward to more of this King of the Ocean. I have one myself in the making as well A piece ...

nice and to the point yet a hint of artistic flair. I dont know if you want a review or even if this needs a review but I want some ...

Ok first off I wanna say you did a good job. Pobodys Nerfect so there will always be critiques. First I just wanna say that your profile says your 24 ...