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I liked this. Its different. Though I did find it slightly confusing. I had no idea what was going on and because of that fact it didnt completely grip me. ...

I really like this piece of writing, it has some beautiful detail imagery. I think however you could of spoke more about how she was dying, the details of why ...

I found this really amusing and did revert me back to a few of my own childhood memories. Going bonkers about chowmein. I found that especially funny :) it braught ...

I really liked this. Its quite a powerful piece and draws you into it as you read. You can image like you're there watching this unfold but helpless to do ...

Wow, this is really an amazing piece of poetry. Its different and powerful and gave a strong use of imagery. I felt like i was just watching the character while ...

I really did like this and found it quite a interesting piece, it was quite different. Though I think it needs to flow more, had to have a more rhymatic ...

I really like this. It shows the emotions you feel and makes a good image of what was happening. The ending made me smile also, its true other things should ...

Agree'd to be honest. You've made good points, I try to review as best as possible but as my mate said, "A true writer is never happy with their own ...

I really like this. Shows emotion. Theres a strong showing of feeling behind this and the ending is quite powerful. Its a good length of poem aswell and gives a ...

Wow, this is a truly amazing piece of poetry. It seriously lefted me stunned. I have read a great deal of poetry but none have captured my mind as much ...

I really liked the flowing of this poem. Was simple but effective. I think it was really well thought out. The rhyming made me smile but I would really think ...

I like this, its unusual. A little hard to follow but I got the idea of it. Though it is slightly lacking the emotion i'd be expecting you to feel. ...

I really thought this was fantastic. It gave a real emotional feel to it of the love and pain that is to be felt. Also it has quite a powerful ...

Hey, Happy New Year :) I really like this piece, give a stong detailed imagery and can place you to the place you are trying to create. However, I would ...

This is a good piece and i'm sure what most people, including me, think in the halls. Though mines followed by alot of swearing and cursing of the younger years ...