LilySoulMahon

This really did make me giggle; I look like a right weirdo randomly laughing in the computer room. Great piece of work :') really imaginative, makes you wonder if this ...

I like this piece of poetry, it’s actually quite sweet and I like the imagery in it. However, I think this would look better if you capitalized your "I"'s as ...

I really like this simplistic piece of poetry :) The way it flows and the structure of it is quite sweet. It brings images and once reading it I couldn't ...

Wow. I love this piece of poetry, I adore the darkness of this piece and find the imagery to be perfected for the true fear this person is feeling. It ...

Beautiful. I love the simplistic imagery of this piece of poetry. It flows and it makes me smile. It also makes me wonder and want more to read, though I ...

Once again a great piece to this book, it was really strong and I couldn't take my eyes off the page. Now I think Imaginemymind got most of the little ...

Wow, I really like this and I'm really looking forward to reading more of it. Its interesting and keeps me captured and I'd definately, if this was a book, buy ...

I like this. The imagery is simplistic yet strong and the powerful appeal of it is lovely. I found it actually, though the structure could be worked on slightly better, ...

I like this, its quite beautiful. Makes me smile :) The structure is nice and simplistic making it something easy to follow and capturing for the reader. I also liked ...

I really liked this, it was a great poem and though I do think another verse or two would have fitted well with it, it did keep me reading to ...

I liked this, the title jumped out with me to begin with and I found it a perfect piece of poetry that I personally enjoyed. It kept me reading but ...

I liked this alot, it was beautiful and well structure and yeah, just an enjoyable piece overall. It kept me reading till the end as it kept me captured in ...

I really liked this, It was different. I found the structure to work well with the piece as it felt well built. Though I do think one or two more ...

I liked this, it was lovely, made me smile. The imagery of it was nice and it kept me reading to the end the way it flowed in my opinion, ...

I really liked this poem. It was nice. I also liked the structure as it kept flowing and the detail was nice, It was simple yet strong, made me smile ...